OUGD502 - Creative Report - creating my publication

I mocked my first editorial up with simplicity in mind. I wanted my text and imagery to portrayed in an interesting but eye catching and easily read way. This is seen below:

After this first mock up was created I started talking to Josiah by email. Through this I received feedback about my design and on editorials in general. He gave me ideas that I will use from now on in my practice.

He also attached a number of images that were useful for research and inspiration. This feedback influenced me so much that I completely changed my publication. Each page was interesting and brought the audience to the page.